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Andre Bendavi ben YEHU words of encouragement
By Georg E Mateos
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Posted: Sunday, January 31, 2010
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Received from Master Andrè a review of my literary, painting and sculptures work here in AuthorsDen and International Creative Thinkers.
Honored and humbled that my work could awake interest and curiosity beyond the cursory and polite look.
It certainly inspire me to try to excel, to live up to the expectations of me.
Andre Bendavi ben YEHU words of encouragement
(or how to inspire others to excel)
“The Poet Theophrastus Would Question To Learn”
An ever SOLITUDE... a boy BORN FROM A STONE... his fate,
Unique youth’s ordeal, the PORTRAIT OF A SAD MAN... eternal,
THE SNIPER'S SONG was risky like Circe’s singing voice and hate;
His CRUEL SEAS formed sea-quakes turning the ocean infernal!
Odysseus woudln’t match his guts and style story in scroll;
Replay three wars, — and write on — THE MAN ON THE GRASSY KNOLL!
POEMS TO READ TOMORROW ABOUT YESTERDAY he’s set
On omniform expressions... pages filled... true pain and goals;
Extolling courage, never left his post, — a man and vet, —
The Poet Theophrastus would question to learn from his soul!
Generic human, — his reply — if asked about his race.
Earth... home... a planet where greed and lies feed sons of seduction;
Ovation’s given to promotion of massive disgrace;
Reserve camps, cartels of abductors — evil “mass destruction”...
GOING NOWHERE... — Who’s the boss? Is there time to save our place?
Enduing life with wisdom and science — real knowledge flows;
Devotion to his Muses never fails to warm his heart...
Valiant soldier — in three wars kept spirit — and body whole...
An IMAGE OF A SAD MAN IN A BROKEN MIRROR, part
Revealing pains and art; and part on children whose lives glow
Diffusing innocence — sublime time — that beauty imparts!
Miletus, Ephesus, Sausalito... towns of great thinkers,
And Pericles proudly meets the son of the last city...
Thales could know “he’s on the air” — and Earth isn’t a sinker.
Egregious human Lords refuse to learn... It is a pity!
Oh, Heraclitus would cure his misanthrope mood and rancor —
Saluting the sculptor that created the SOULS' BOAT ANCHOR!
By Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by D. Kenneth Ross |
8/2/2010 |
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| Georg, What I didn't see at first was the obvious. When finally the obvious throttled me I knew you wouldn't allow me to be embarrassed. You teach the art of openness and the right to be wrong. How else does one learn? I continue to look, thanks. D. Kenneth |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/18/2010 |
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Congratulations Georg
Sensational review
Words of encouragement from the heart
And you my sweet friend, you are very worthy of such honor
Once again Congratulations
Wishing you success and Peace Love and Light…Yolie
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
5/17/2010 |
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GEORG - WOW! CONGRATS! ENJOY THE LIMELIGHT!
I thought Sausalito was a suburb of San Francisco?
Cuz - TK...
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/3/2010 |
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Congratulations, Georg! It is truly a gift to have one's creations appreciated in such a manner. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
2/1/2010 |
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| Most deserving accolades for certain. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/1/2010 |
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It certainly inspires me to try to excel, to live up to the expectations of me.
A wonderful endorsement of all your efforts, brother. Keep On, Keepin On.
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
1/31/2010 |
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This is so nice, Georg. We work and write and receive praise, whether we really deserve it or not from our friends because, after all, no one wants to make a friend feel bad, but when you receive this kind of praise and encouragement from one such as this, yes! Take a breather and pat yourself on the back because you, my friend, deserve it.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
1/31/2010 |
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| Ben said a mouthful there for you my friend, you better take a week off to capture all the loose ends, and tie them together, along with your crown and sceptre. Congrats! Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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