by Nicole C Nielsen
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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New found glory in new found misery
They can't grasp the grace
Your hands have touched
All they see is red, dark deceiving red
When you see in black in white,
Living in colorless shame
No hues,no inspiring rainbows
Only the occasional shades of gray
Blended between sweet ivory and darkness
Reminiscent colors, ones you once saw clearly
Faded behind anguish
Those colors deliver the red, that dark deceiving red
The red against soft pale porcelain
Beautiful strokes across a blank canvas
White luminous chariots follow inevitable paths
To that place of cloudy shadows, that darkness
Inducing the red, that dark deceiving red
Crimson from vein to vein, releasing, liberating
Even a passion
But all they see is red, dark deceiving red
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|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Beautifully passionate insight..
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Beautiful and colorful images,take care
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your strong and colorful imagery serves to emphasize the meaning of your words, Nicole. You give the reader much to think about. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by 000 000
|Awesome! I love the words..Almost Captivating
Sounds like a writing of someone living in the shadows of regret
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Very unusual and excellent write.
|Reviewed by John DeDakis
|Lots to think about here and some well-turned phrases. Thanks.|