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Divided as two
by Elisabeth Barstowe
Saturday, November 07, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

Only the strongest of hearts
can survive a draught like this.
And only the weakest of minds
can sit back and do nothing in times like these.
My SOUL survival takes precedence
and I am still committed.
For you are after all
my other half:
The ONE that completes me
and heartshapes my soul.

In times of trouble I turn to you
to complete the cycle and ignite us again.
Love is equal, love is true
and I am on that train again.

To search for what I came for
a yearn for similarities.
A longing to share my thoughts and ideals
to create a mind of unity.
United in bonds of words and touch,
lips open to sound two minds.
And lips locked to fire two souls,
to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one.

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Reviewed by Dale Clark 11/23/2009

I enjoyed this fine pen... Beautiful.

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond 11/13/2009

Wow Elizabeth this is so romantic and dripping with emotion.
We all seek to find ourselves in someone else.

I can relate

Jerry

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 11/10/2009

And lips locked to fire two souls,
to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one.

Fabulous lines portraying the ultimate quest. Patrick

Reviewed by richard cederberg 11/9/2009

Always pressing forward with positive verve to become the best we can be, and doing it with another soul of like mind. A beautifully romantic goal worth fighting for. Nicely expressed.
richard

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/7/2009

to die a little together.
Aiming to be reborn as one

Sweet and deeply meaningful sentiments, Elisabeth. Very well-expressed. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Eugene Williams 11/7/2009

Well mastered piece liked it