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Wondering
by Mary Ellen Quire
Saturday, December 06, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Time stops for no one.

You take from me,
Both body and soul,
Heart and head,
Draining love and wisdom,
An hourglass with endless sand.

A sundial moves on.

Bells ring.
People sing.
Joy and laughing.

Get off you knees!
This, too, shall pass.

Deep wounds, deep scars.

And so goes time...

Marching forward.
Always.

It leaves its destitutes
Gazing back.

Wondering...

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Reviewed by Paul Judges	11/9/2009

Well written, Mary




Reviewed by John Domino	9/28/2009

A poetic cliff hanger that leaves one wondering... Loved It! John Michael domino




Reviewed by Lois Christensen	1/11/2009

Wondering is good for us all and you express yourself very well here. What is to be done with rejection, just put it aside? I don't know but rejection isn't fun, and we all try to wonder what will come next in our life and what happens does make us as we are.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	12/6/2008

As this is the first of your work I have had the pleasure of reading I am truly impressed...it spoke to my heart and my mind and gave me somthing to sit back and digest as to how it also pertained to my own life. In poetry that is always a bonus. fee




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	12/6/2008

powerful




Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	12/6/2008

This is a very good poem,take care Edwin




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	12/6/2008

I can understand your write life must go on Take care Ron

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