by Carissa J. Brookens
Friday, July 09, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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An angry voice, raised into a angry shout
Is only the beginning to your madness.
You scream and shout at me,
Breaking me down the best you can.
You know if you keep at it, that Iíll break down and cry.
As soon as you start to see me weaken your madness increases,
You hit on me, waiting to see if Iíll fight back,
But duck and dodge you at least for a little while.
I fight back, but I never hit you,
Cuz I know what will happen if I do.
I cover my face and stomach,
Cuz you know thatís where I hate the most,
But you almost always outsmart me,
Not that itís hard for anyone to do.
I curl up like a baby fetus trying to stay safe,
But Iím never safe, not when Iím around you.
As I curl up my only wish is to die,
So I never have to feel this helpless,
This hopeless, this weak, or this much pain.
Soon you take your madness to another level,
You start to kick at me,
Kicking at my ribs, chest and stomach,
Knowing that Iíll have to move my arms soon.
As soon as I move you kick and kick,
Until you get tired and it sounds like something breaks.
Before you walk away you throw an elbow into my face,
Causing me to start bleeding on the floor,
I move quickly so I donít leave a stain
That will only upset you more.
Walking through a house I should know
With eyes glazed over with tears should be so easy for me,
But it wasnít easy at all -
It was like running through an unknown maze.
Walking blind, gasping for air and catching blood...
Betrayal reflects through my tears glazed on
And pain flows through my veins,
But through it all, all you see is another victory.
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|Reviewed by Carissa Brookens
|Thank you all for reading and for your comments.
Lady__The Source, This is a male/female relationship.
Sorry, it took me so long to get back to ya'll.
Have a wonderful day ya'll! Hugs, "C.J."
|Reviewed by A PAX
|is this a parent child relationship or male/female......either way......its horriffic.......
don't let it repeat........run!
pax and prayers........A
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|very unpleasantsituation, yet well written|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I hope you don't take this wrong. This guy is not a man. He's a bully who loves to beat on the weak and innocent. I'de love 5 minutes in a room with him. Only one of us would be coming out. I never did believe in packing lunches. If you haven't left him I would suggest you do and get help please. This guy is sick and needs to be put away. Best of luck.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|deplorable situation -get help ...|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Hon I've been there, it's criminal, he should be arrested, and you need to find yourself again, as a normal functioning human being.
Dont take this, he is the one that is sick, not you.
And dont believe the lies, or false apologies.
Abuse is a crime! Abusive types need a big burly bloke to take their anger out on, instead of a defenseless woman. What cowardice.
Co-dependancy no more Hon, before you lose yourself completely.
Plzzzzze think on it, keep in touch