by Tori L Harrison
Monday, December 23, 2002
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You say you loved me, but were those words true ?
You say you cared.
But if you did, then why am I crying?
If you loved me, why are we not together anymore.
I gave you all I had.
All I wanted was to b loved.
I didn't ask for much.
I asked for truthfulness, and love.
I also asked for honestness, and faithfulness
But I guess that was too much to ask for.
So why fret?
All it is is just another heart broken,
Broken by lies.
Broken by hurt and pain.
It doesn't matter.
All that matters is that I'm me.
Nobody can change that.
Only I can change myself.
And that I will do.
I will change the gullableness.
Those 3 words are not played with.
Neither is the mind.
Well, the mind, and those 3 words were played with.
For how long?
I do not know.
I dont know that either.
But only time and friends can help heal the heart.
The true friends that is.
Love is not a game.
But I'm beginning to think that it is.
Love is not a joke either.
But it seems like it is.
this poem was wrote b/c my boyfriend broke up with me. he broke up with me the day that wouldve been my grandmothers 62nd birthday(12-23), if she wouldnt have passed 8-17-99. and tomorrow(christmas eve) is my birthday.
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|Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
|Tori~ I am so sorry, break-ups are a B*^ no matter when they happen, hope that you have a speedy recovery... Just remember- there are always those who care very much for you. :)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Loved this it is heartfelt.
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|I know this feeling. I've had it for three years and still going. Don't let me discourage you, but something better must come along the way. It always works that way ;) Good write. Good emotion!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Tori, hon you are not alone this happens over and over again. The only sound alternative you have it to keep trying. I want to wish you A VERY HAPPY BITHDAY TOMORROW. And a Happy Holiday Seson. And you can find friends to help you. Just be careful whom you choose. Happy Holidays and again HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|Tori these lessons in life are never easy, I wish you peace from this pain, and I applaud that you are able to bring this piece out. josie|