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moment with the clouds on the walls by Rachel D McWhirter Thursday, March 04, 2004 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
my troubled head, full of lyrics and words, sees shades of you in your empty room. touching walls to feel the parts of you left behind- but such great leagues stretch us apart. i can only hope to grasp images of you through wires that connect behind a screen. and from so far away you look even more wonderful. come back my darling- the heights don't scare me. i'm ready to jump. when you come back down you can take my heart and lock it inside yours. i step from the room to find every song is about you
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Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers	3/5/2004

Complete in thought and excellently penned. Touching to the heart. Lisa




Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)	3/4/2004

have you ever read a poem that you felt you could have written because of how it is so relevant and because of how it speaks to you? this is that for me. excellent stuff. tks.




Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)	3/4/2004

BRILLIANT concept!