by Cathrine Hottran
Sunday, January 11, 2004
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Bitter anger, jealousy, revenge,
Itís the darkest in us all,
It depends upon our call,
As we guarantee our fall.
I fear the martyr in me,
As much as I fear it in you,
So why do we run to the lies,
Instead of facing whatís true .
Imprisoning our self in our minds,
Repeating primitive history,
Trough out the times.
Easily picking the budding twigs,
Ignoring the roots we bear,
Itís just a matter of time,
Before itíll reappear.
Inhaling the tox of self-pity,
Searching for somewhere to dump the blame,
We are all a part of this circle,
And all as one, the same.††††††††††
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|Reviewed by Richard Bowers
|It begins it. I have been here before, as I could tell.
For finding: that myself I have reborn
But not seen, is forever to persist
To gather around the seasons of space with the everlastingness of event
With the layered energy as it is made of things.
Into the logical fiber of the tribute: a thought arises
And stays on course, slowly progressing, not done.
By fear: the fear thatís been since forever,
In the same space the inseparable normal good
Being passed through mankind
Came accessible to me: I fade into remoteness
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Art and knowledge, wisdom and beauty met to compose
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|gold mine, got this loud and clear, but I've been daring myself to be different|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|so very true this is, well done this is so apt...take care...Mark|
|Reviewed by P. Michaels
|Guess it is our human nature. Your verse is written well and it shows our human condition. We can reach from above and live on loftier levels with some effort though.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
well written !
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wise and true words, Cathrine. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Amen to that. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
|Wow. Great write! :)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|History repeats. All is just the same. Wise thoughts.
|Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
|The poison IS us. If you haven't discovered Jiddu Krishnamurti's works yet, you might want to look into it. Has a familiar tinge.|
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|This is a good one, and a good way to introduce yourself on AuthorsDen -- welcome to the Den by the way.|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Quite introspective. Welcome to Author's Den. -- Jeff|