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Was I Wrong?
by Vivian W.Y So

Tuesday, August 26, 2003

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Was I Wrong?

Woman: Writing a letter to you,
Yet you're gone.
Gone not to heaven,
But in someone else arms.

Sometimes I would rather think
I had killed you.
Yet when I asked myself
In tranquility, I

I really don't want you to be hurt.

I would rather keep my sobs like raindrops
Quietly tiptoes to my letters to you.
I know you would never read them,
For I would never let them shown.

I know my heart can't be heal,
And writing to you don't help a bit.
Cause in my mind I know
I know you never cared and you will never know-

How much I care!

Man: Maybe I did care
Only you didn't know.
Maybe I once loved
Yet I couldn't speak of
The love that once existed.

Maybe I didn't know what to do.
I only knew I didn't want to get hurt.
I knew we were different.
I knew values were far from matched.

So I've decided
To leave you.
The longer I stay, I more hurt both of us gonna be.
So I left,
Leaving you behind my heart hurt.
But then I knew my option was right,
Cause I've found another
Whose values are so close to mine.

You will find someone like I did
Who would cherish you more then I did.
Just listen please...

Woman: I don't want to hear.
You the selfish dog, I ever met.
If you really loved me,
You wouldn't leave me because something didn't match.

Lovers compromise,
Lovers won't easily say goodbye.

You never loved me.
Never loved me true .
Oh mine,
What did I do wrong?


©Aug 26, 2003
Eliza Simmons

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Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/27/2003
Hi Vivian:

You have written a scenario so close to everyday life. There are selfish people like this.

A good wakeup call to those who are in the same boat. The woman in here was not wrong indeed. Yes, true lovers do compromise each other, there shouldn't be any mismatch.

Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
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