She Finally Did It!!!!!!!
by Sarah J Beara
Saturday, December 14, 2002
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As we stood in the corner, she was pushed his way,
All she needed to do was walk up and say "hey"
She was nervous, she was scared but she knew she had to do it.
And she was the braver one and she finally went through it.
She said hi, she walked away, there wasn't much else to it.
It's just the beginning, it's only one step, but I know she can do it cuz she's the best,
Mabye tomorrow she'll say more then hi.
Mabye tomorrow she'll even say goodbye.
:) :) :)
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|Reviewed by me
|too bad you have to quit because your poetry is awesome|
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|Who's it about¿¿?? ( did you get it yet¿)good write|
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|Reviewed by Sarah
|I just want everyone to know that sadly I have quit authors den. I love this site to death and I'm sorry if anyone is upset but it's because of the frickin mail and phone number verification crap. I think someone made a big mistake when they did that and it has caused me to quit. I tried putting in fake stuff but it didn't work. Again I am very sad that I had to do this but I'm also very upset with this rule thing. Well, bye to all, enjoy the poetry that I have now :)
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik
|I would say you're on your way, but you're already there. Now you'll always be able to return even if you think your lost.
|Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
|this is cute, so true, be brave!|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Good for her !!! :)