by Smita Tewari
Tuesday, November 03, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The glow by the first light
Today, after years, I welcomed the dawn,
the sun being drawn out slowly of its nocturnal shell,
was like a glow, shy in coming, yet not able to stay away,
and I was like the morning dew, waiting...
and whilst it spread across the sky,
a riot of colours came alive, by the first light,
a symphony floated across to me, of joy,
and breathless, I viewed it, listened to it, rooted!
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|Reviewed by Charlie
|So pretty. Soft as pastels. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Your joy in the dawn is contagious!
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Awww, love the line that it took yrs. Beautiful poetry Smita.
Derailedpoet aka Janet x
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A precious poem Smita. You have a wonderful way of arranging words into a wonderful poetic song.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY HERE...THAT IS DONE SO VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|You bring this moment to life, Smita. Excellent similes in the first verse. By the time you began the second verse, I felt as though I could feel the sun reaching toward me. Loved it. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|Delightful write of joy in the morning. You share a rapture in the creation.......Jerry|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|mmm... this one is delicious... your imagery superb! Your writing makes me want to melt in it, as dew melts in the dawn's light...
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Wonderful write...free flowing....keep them coming...lovely write...cheers....BHUWAN!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|How beautifully this flows...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have shared the moment very effectively within your verses, Smita. Well done! Love and best wishes,