|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|It's true, too many of us have let the material world come to own us, It's time to make the trip back to nature. Great poem Love, Pierre
|Reviewed by A PAX
|so true....the memory of ourselves, and our environments....and written so well.....applause....Pax Anita :)|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Well composed poem, Susan.|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Let us all take a deep breath and contemplate "Nature's green abyss"...
A well-scribed ode to awareness, Susan.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very lovely indeed sweet lady....stay safe and well..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|great imagery in your words as always Susan|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A great nature poem Susan! Yes, I recall the memory of fresh air and blue skies in upstate N.Y. when I was a teenager. Going back was like visiting a Hillbilly slum. We rarely drive backward - we only do it because we have to. I guess we need to keep on driving forward and keep out headlights on for safety first on that road of life ahead.
Love and abundant blessings,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Enchanting journey. Your renewal and return was much anticipated.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This was absolutely beautiful, Susan, and I felt every word...nothing feels better to me than breathing the air one finds out in the thick of nature! Some wonderful phrasing here....
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|finding a memory and regaining sense and sensibility : win-win-win!!! Fabulous, coherent (and humorous!) philosophising in tightly woven verse. You never lose your style or your generous touch, Susan. So good to see you here again. Love it when you seamlessly weave your urbane and free-spirit sides to bring us such presence, such balance, such wisdom. Bless you, xx|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Susan this is exceptionally well done, you drew us in to your country like a moth is drawn to light except in this case you allowed us not only to live but to enjoy,
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|something about the mountains........"while searching for a memory"
keep ahold of those memories....nice write
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|love the truth and depth and beauty!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Susan, this is stunning poetry! I am so glad to see you back here, I have missed you so much.
It certainly seems you have taken a mental health break..I need to do this soon, but my choice of sanctuary is the ocean. Perhaps Tahiti or some remote quaint island retreat...
Come back again very soon, don't stay away....
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Simply beautiful, Susan.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"The material comes to own you..."
and once we've made that realisation, Susan,
we're in a position to move beyond and find ourselves again.
A gracious ode to what's best and natural and, in hope,
what will last a while longer if we're wise enough
to temper greed.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Invoking a search for happiness is something worth finding.
To secure them to memory get harder the older one gets.
But it's worth it.
I think poets live in a fantasy world anyway!!
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you have shared within your verses here, Susan. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,