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O Stop Being Superficial
by Phoenix Rox
Monday, December 14, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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This is to emphasize that there is more to a person than just looks.

The beginning…

O’ Stop being Superficial,

Stop being so Tri-vial.

Just because I look so hot,

Does not mean I have no brains.

Just because I’m NO model

Does not mean you can call me names.


I may be blond and dumb.

I may be blond and wise.

How do you really know,

that I won’t take you by surprise?


I may not look too exquisite.

I may not be a model.

I may still.. be the sweetest person

you encounter in this life.


O’ Stop being Superficial,

Stop being so Tri-vial.

Learn to see beyond the layer

Only then will you be smarter.

I hope when you look at  me,

a wonderful human is what you see.


I write this because like many of you, I too am tired of reading messages from strangers talking about my looks. ‘Oh you look good? Can we be friends?’- both from men and women.LOL. To those strangers- I am privileged that you feel so and thank you for those compliments. But when I get these messages, all I think is- You don’t even know me! I just wished people stopped being superficial.

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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/14/2009
Your write goes right to the core of truth and misjudging. Always sad when people don't make the time to get to know the person...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/14/2009 is simply sad when one judges or is judged because of happens all too often in our society and it saddens me to think of how many are picked on in school etc....could go on and on ....but I won't, great write to ponder!

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