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|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Wow, this is a keeper and so excellant!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This is very very realistic write....excellent.....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|How quickly angry words crush the spirit of a love
That seemed destined for forever
Their weight turning friendship to enmity
Leaving us in a breathless freefall
Accelerating from one accusation to another like a bullet
Whose trajectory aims
Straight for the soul
Floor by floor, year by year
Until we hit bottom
Heartbreaking write.. When love dies .. nothing is sadder