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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You should have to remember.
But it's like the old ember,
From the fire of the gone passion,
And your partner won't get your compassion.
So true, Lily. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Very good metaphor.|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|a great poem you have here|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Fantastic write !|
|Reviewed by Afrika Abney
|Great write.Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Joe McCarthy
|Very cutting edge, this poem.|
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
|bravo my friend,glad you came on over to be with us,Charlie|
|Reviewed by Sara Wadington
|Well written!! I enjoyed reading your works at WBM, looking forward to reading more here :)|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Wow excellent*~* Lily! Hey I have a few poems in poetry.coms analogies also:)|