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Love is like an unsheathed sword
by Lily Alex
Wednesday, August 29, 2001
Not rated by the Author.
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Love is like an unsheathed sword.
When two are trying to keep it bright,
One pulls the grip,
One holds the sharp blade tight
Like it's the best reward.
It's strange,
But all can change.
You are the one with the handle.
And you will not pity your partner clenching cold steel.
Even seeing his bleeding skin, you won't feel.
Why?
Don't you remember your hands on the blade?
When there was no help, no mercy, no aid.
Don't you remember your own pain,
And your suffering in vain?
You should have to remember.
But it's like the old ember,
From the fire of the gone passion,
And your partner won't get your compassion.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/4/2009 |
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You should have to remember.
But it's like the old ember,
From the fire of the gone passion,
And your partner won't get your compassion.
So true, Lily. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
1/25/2006 |
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| Very good metaphor. |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
11/4/2004 |
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| a great poem you have here |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
5/23/2003 |
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| Fantastic write ! |
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| Reviewed by Afrika Abney |
10/30/2002 |
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Great write.Thanks for sharing.
Afrika M.A.Abney |
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| Reviewed by Joe McCarthy |
3/16/2002 |
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| Very cutting edge, this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra |
3/6/2002 |
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| Excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader) |
2/23/2002 |
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| bravo my friend,glad you came on over to be with us,Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Sara Wadington |
2/22/2002 |
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| Well written!! I enjoyed reading your works at WBM, looking forward to reading more here :) |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
9/27/2001 |
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| Wow excellent*~* Lily! Hey I have a few poems in poetry.coms analogies also:) |
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