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Fate
by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Sunday, October 25, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The leaves danced
and the flowers sang.
The roots had the last laugh;
they sprouted up and kissed the sky.
Copyright 2009 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
10/28/2009 |
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I love this, Bhuwan. As usual you used minimal words to express eternal and far reaching thoughts.
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/25/2009 |
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Bhuwan,
Love the contrast between the first two airy lines and the second pair which for me despite their glory, too, have an enigamtic undertone.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/25/2009 |
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| Sounds like they were head-over-heels, in that case, Bhuwan! Love the lightness of touch and emotion in this picturesque cameo. TY Kate xx |
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