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Slaying the Demons within!
Oh woe is me,
pretending to be free,
from the clutches and snares,
of one who causes many tears,
enslaving me as it would be, eternally!
My subscription within,
causes an almighty din,
where O where should my help come,
he has me helpless, he has me dumb,
Fiery flatulent beast of the air!
I shall take up my sword,
sever his ruthless discord,
fickle to the bitter end is he destined,
no excuse allowed when finally questioned,
Yea oh yea unsheathing steadily!
One swift precision blow,
take out the beast and his show,
revealing blood running like crude,
menacing traits ungainly and rude,
Steathily now, he is within my strike!
He lays prostrate upon the ground,
headless demon, not a sound,
I will never walk this way again,
mark the spot, of how and when,
I slew that vindictive Man of old..
What do you know, he had no Gold!
Ch'erie de Perrot
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|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|I am having trouble with formatting in my site, this is how my poem turned out despite repeated efforts to sort it, alas, rather than not add it, I chose to let it appear this way. Thank you for the reviews thus far, and please if anyone else has had this happen, fwd the way to fix the format. Happy Christmas to everyone, love always
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|The demons within are powerful and full of darkness. CONQUER! Decapitate! Leave them riling in their own blood!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|intensely visualized, Ch"erie ...|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|a beautifully written piece
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A lot of old world charm with fire and verve! Wonderfully written and well understood.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|What an encounter! Thank you for sharing this tale, Ch'erie. Your poem reminds me of one that I posted here a short while ago entitled, "The Death of Beth." It came to me in a dream. Love and best wishes to you,