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Kenneth W Bielby

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The Sacrificial Candle
by Kenneth W Bielby

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Have you ever watched a candle, as it sacrificed its life
As it gives to you a light, so you may see
To light your path and show to you, the dangers, traps, and strife
As it burns, with all its power, for you and me.

Have you ever watched a candle, as its tears run down it side
Have you ever touched the tears, and felt the pain
Have you ever seen the flicker, of a candle in the wind
And the way the battle rages, with the flame

Have you ever stopped and looked at, the building of the tears
Have you ever watched the tears, before they fall
Have you seen the ragged landscape, of the shell it leaves behind
Of a candle, who spent its life, and gave its all

Ken Bielby

If we only understood what it is, to give our all.......

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Reviewed by John Domino
Well done good fand faithful one!
and here is a personal invitation
to visit my CHRISTIAN website
when you get a chance.

John Michael Domino
Reviewed by A PAX
this is good!
Reviewed by Donald Balsley (Reader)
I will have to watch a candle in a differant
way from now on..Thanks for the insight Don
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Thanks for making me take a closer look!
Reviewed by jude forese
without the candle of hope, the darkness would reign... craftfully expressive...
Reviewed by Nancy D.
Great write, tomorrow when burning my candle I will look at its tears and think of you and what you wrote.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
I think this is my favorite so far of yours Ken I can relate to it.Excellent!
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Wow!! I'll never look lightly at a candle burning again... such a powerful and meaningful poem..Thanks for sharing it...

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