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Take My Breath Away
by Bonnie M Torrente

Friday, August 08, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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~ Take My Breath Away ~

I will breath for you, my Darling,
When the air you have is gone.
I'll climb into your Lilly white bed,
To breath for the life holding on.

Two peas in a pod, you and I are,
Fully able to take off our masks.
To reveal our true nature, our spirit,
Living life in the light we two cast.

Oh we fought,  we tried to gain power,
To control one vain.
Time had its own way of melding,
Us two, to be one in the same.

Now the Angel of Death is approaching,
To escort you to a heavenly place.
Your suffering's thru, peace awaits you 
When our life together ends in embrace

One request before you go my Dearest.
Without you, no need for me to stay
Do one last deed, fill my only need...
Kiss me, and take my breath away.



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Reviewed by Michelle Hudson (Reader) 8/27/2003
Wow,This is amazing!
You are so very talented!
Sincerely , Michelle
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/17/2003
this is a terrific poem, some applause for Bonnie, clap clap clap. peace
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader) 8/12/2003
A great poem.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 8/10/2003
This is great Bonnie!! Got me all blurry!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 8/9/2003
WOW, this is goose bumley awesome!!!!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 8/9/2003
Absolutely beautiful...
Reviewed by John Bidwell 8/9/2003
Wow, you reached into the depths of love and pulled out a diamond.
Thanks for sharing.
This was so special.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 8/9/2003
Oh my goodness! I got goosebumps! Wonderful poem, Bonnie!
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 8/9/2003
This is a beautiful piece.
If fiction, it is fabulously written.
If true, you have my thoughts, prayers, and understanding.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 8/9/2003
So moving Bonnie. This brings tears to the eyes and a lump to the throat!
Jill :)
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl 8/9/2003
I am speechless...this is so very touching..I would feel the same way completely.
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 8/9/2003
very nice write..Floreann
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 8/9/2003
well penned!!!
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 8/9/2003
A beautiful tragedy that overcomes even death. Very well written Bonnie. Bill
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 8/9/2003
Wow this piece is beautifully penned.
Kudos, Bonnie!


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