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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
5/23/2013 |
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Nice one Lily, it sounds very old like from a long time ago. Romance at it's best and one of your best!
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/23/2013 |
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for we have gathered in the meadows of life our sweet song
A very lovely song, indeed. |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
5/22/2013 |
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| I think it would be wonderful to hear your read this poem before a live audience--might be something even a Dark Knight would come out of the shadows and slip in the back to hear it read--well done |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/22/2013 |
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Such a soft declaration of love set in the peace and tranquility of nature. Adorable, simply adorable.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
5/22/2013 |
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You keep surpassing yourself in beauty, in romance and in depth of love.
Your heart has found an eternal spring of the most beautiful inspiration.
So deep and beautiful again Carol
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
5/22/2013 |
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Carolee, this is a beautiful sonnet ... words well chosen, layered in the right place.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
5/22/2013 |
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That should be a wedding vow!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
5/22/2013 |
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It doesn't get any better than this, this is true poetry. You are a true poetess of love and romance.
Di |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/21/2013 |
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This should be made public and sold. It is the best love poem I have read. How many sweethearts would love to have a card with this printed on it. Marvelous.
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
5/21/2013 |
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so many before me have stated all that is to be remembered in this write of love eternal
budd |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/21/2013 |
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| What Jerry said times ten...;-) e |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
5/21/2013 |
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| Beautiful....... Makes one to wish for love. Love, Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/21/2013 |
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| IIIIII.......LOVE this, I do! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
5/21/2013 |
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~Lily~
Gentle the meadow in sweet song of the morning dove coos.
Beautiful splendor in essence of your heart.
LadyMary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/21/2013 |
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Mystically compelling; I am drawn in the mood that you have shared through your verses here, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/21/2013 |
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| Perfect in every way is this poem of absolute and eternal love. Your words are like an oracle delivered from the Goddess of Love. |
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