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aids
by Aleni harriet
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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PREVENTION WAS ABSTANCE,
CONDOMS WERE UNFAITHFULINESS,
DEATH, THE CURE,.
BUT ALL WAS END __ AIDS!
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I ONCE HAD A FRIEND,
GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME,
I LOVED__ I CARED,
BUT ALL WAS END__ AIDS!
I ENJOYED TO MAXIMUM.
BUT PANGS TODAY,
SMILES AT PAST,
BUT ALL WAS END __ AIDS!
I HOPE __ I WISH,
I SWEAR! UPON MY LAST BREATHE.
I STRUGGLE TO BE FREE!
BUT ALL WAS END__ AIDS!
PREVENTION WAS ABSTANCE,
CONDOMS WERE UNFAITHFULINESS,
DEATH, THE CURE,.
BUT ALL WAS END __ AIDS!
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
8/10/2010 |
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| i love your honesty...i love how you've expressed it...i feel your heart...i feel your palpitating fear....AID's! is not the end unless you allow it to totally define you...keep writing writing writing...unexplained relief from anger and fear |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/10/2010 |
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| Don't believe I have ever read a more heartfelt poem on the subject of AIDS. |
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| Reviewed by Wayne Bien |
8/10/2010 |
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Wonderful poem. I can feel your emotions.
Wayne |
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