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informal formal (haiku)
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Joseph* OneLight*®
Sunday, November 29, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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"haiku understands me" ~Joseph, 2009
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circling coloured leaves
counterclockwise rhythmic dance
~mesmerizing scene
©2009 Joseph* ~ OneLight*®
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/29/2009 |
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You captured a fall moment...great ku again.
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| Reviewed by R. Arrington |
11/29/2009 |
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| A mystery of the fall season. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/29/2009 |
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Doesn't get much better: the picture unfolded before my eyes as I read this, and it's a beauty. :) Well done, Joseph.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/29/2009 |
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Hypnotic counterclockwise movement of words in the mind to mesmerize reason!
Georg
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