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M.H.S
by Dominique Carter
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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•  Sorrowful is the Soul
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There was this one person that changed my life so I had to write about her.

M.H.S

When I think of you I think of Love
Your a rariety, purely a gift from above,
Your laugh and your smile, truly a light to behold
and the way that you love, never gets old,
the day we met was a bit unusual
your buttermilk skin i caressed is beautiful,
from the dimples on your cheeks to your hair to your toes
is partly the reason that I cant let you go,
see the other half of you i love is without question
its your amount of intelligence, and you sence of direction,
your stern, your meek, your virtuous, your strong
yet still humble enough to forgive when im wrong,
see ive lied, ive been afraid, misjust to decieve
and i hurt till this day when i see you leave,
i didnt deserve you before and i dont deserve you now
but a real man ill become when i pray to the clouds,
god understands the misfortunes the mans been sold
and all my short-comings that fit each role,
see ill fight for your love through the heat and the cold
because life is meaningless without My Heart and Soul






 

 



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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 8/24/2011
Very deep, sincere, and moving piece to write of one that you will forever carry in your heart...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 8/23/2011
Heartfelt depiction of your love!
Blessings
xox :-D
Reviewed by Glen Manese 8/23/2011
I liked how you pour out the words with this narrative of a write... to the reader... I did see a typo in the word "Sence", "Sense", but a minor detail to say the lease... May be a space in-between the lines for readability... also... but all in all you did a good job with this verse... Also, you were inspired by someone to let this all flow from your mind and heart to the pen... Thanks for sharing...
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