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Ninos de La Luna
by Nicole L Davis (Vergara)
Tuesday, August 30, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Children of The Moon (Ninos de La Luna)
is per chance prophetic of our times in referrance to many occurrances. All good things eventually come to some end. |
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Pale shades and hues
seemingly unchanging
landscape cosmic photograph
alluring, imploring
children come home
Upward glances, gazes
heaviness weighing in
denied freedoms of flight
yearning, hungering
old world beckons anew
Poignant sighs and desires
drown terrestrial bound
sufferage in masses
pleading, weeping
father bring us home
(c) Nicole L. Davis (Vergara)
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
9/5/2011 |
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| There is such an other-worldly feel to this poem, it pulls the reader into its depth of emotion. |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
9/3/2011 |
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Excellent atmospheric poem, Nicole. I especially liked the last two lines in the first stanza
alluring, imploring
children come home
and the last two lines in the final stanza,
pleading, weeping
father bring us home |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
9/2/2011 |
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| A good poem, Nicole, perhaps featuring sons and daughters who have spread their wings and maybe come to grief. We see different things in poetry, sometimes not quite what the poet means. Some good descriptions. |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
8/31/2011 |
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Nicole, to me this seems to express the longing for my heavenly home, along with the appeal of my earthly home. Appealing, yet fraught with suffering that causes me to plead for deliverance.
Tell me I'm not totally off the wall in my understanding!
You will find all types of poetry on AD; Welcome, I hope you like it here as so many of us do.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/30/2011 |
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"We nontraditional writers are also being more widely accepted"
By nontraditional writers I'm guessing that you mean you don't write rhyming verse, because nothing I see here is nontraditional, people have been composing poetry like this for many years, including myself.
If by nontraditional you mean the messages of your poetry, I suppose I can grant you that, but still, this poem seems pretty darn mainstream to me. |
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