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Books
• A Work in Progress - Come the Realms of Winter

• The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

• The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point


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• The Papyrus of Queen Nitocris

• Childhood Shadows


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• Miss You

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• I Awake

• Red Moon

• so easy

• Everyday

• The Battle Fierce

• A puzzle

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New Title - A spining world
by Diane C Hundertmark
Saturday, August 31, 2002
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By Diane C. Hundertmark


the world is spinning 'round and changing


my life is spinning out and changing



.whirling




turning


at an ever faster speed



more and more




forward --backward



up




and



down


making me ill and tired



unable to talk or think


and yet



there you are


quite and sedate



warm and strong


your arms around me



slowing


my spinning down


your hands



smoothing


the exhaustion from my mind


your words whispered



slowing


the world's spinning 'round


your eyes



drawing


out my thoughts



freeing


my soul


 


Copyrighted 1981


This was written to my husband many years ago for our anniversary. 

Now I have given it a Title.

Now that we are going to be at one of those important number of years anniversary this year, I think I may be giving this to him again.

It fits very well since NOW I have fully recovered from the accident I had in 2006 that took me away from writing for time.

 

 


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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/25/2009
It's great to have someone to catch us when we need them to. We're lucky if we have that. I like the style of this poem. You give a feeling of falling (spinning) out of control. Nicely penned:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/11/2009
Beautiful! Interesting way you put this together. I enjoyed reading it and I'm sure your husband will love it. Good job.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 1/30/2009
It's rather nice, I think. Some people are kites & others are rocks. Both are important. :)
Reviewed by John Domino 9/27/2008
Very creative!

God Bless,

JMD
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/26/2008
Great to have you online again. A spinning world you presented to us. Things should fall into place woon with the anniversary to celebrate this year. Enjoyable write. Hope hubby loves it. A nice present.
Reviewed by Micha Julian 4/8/2003
yes!
Oh, and the form...so much relate, just waiting for the "you"...WONDERFUL, really love that you spun it, literally onto the screen, and what it 'means', oh, yes! +++++
michele
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione 10/20/2002
not too shabby -- damn, never realized you have a classic here.
Reviewed by Peter Benson 10/4/2002
Impressive
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/31/2002
oh, this is indeed nice!! loved this!!


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