|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Well-stated but my hopes are that we can avoid a THIRD World War. Bush is up for election; may things can be turned around ... I hope so.
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|Agree with you the war is underway, but it's a war against God and Islam. A war made to protect Sharon's dastardly deeds on Arab land.
Sept. 11, gruesome as it was, was only the fruits of a war that has its roots firmly planted in American foreign policy, a policy that has lost all credibility, justice and fairness. A policy whose sole aim is to protect the warped selfish interests of a few men in power and their directors in Israel (and not the common American on the street).
Now how does one stop this war? I have a suggestion posted sometime back on my site. Please take out time to check out the article titled: "How to Eradicate Terror." Will appreciate your comments. As regards the comments you left on my poem (which seem to be a hit with many blindfolded Americans) I suggest that you switch off CNN and Fox News for a while and get some real info. by paying us a visit in Iraq and Palestine. Thank you!
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Jared, I started to write you a review saying that this is all part of our evolution. I decided to just make it a poem. I found you by way of those wonderful comments you left on Safi Abdi's poem on Al Jazeera. Good job. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Excellent writing.....I'll be reading you......ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Jared...I have chills....
I wrote you a message twice....
clicked on comments...
went to the poetry page...
and my message is not there...
I will try once again...
They can mock if they want to
but this is serious...
You tell the message...
and wash your hands of it...
"He who has ears, Let him hear"
I agree with you...
now lets try again...see if it
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Interesting and timely poem, Jared!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Jared, an unusual piece for you, sounds as if you just might be gettin' that ole' jailhouse religion...Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Interesting and enjoyable.|
|Reviewed by Scott Zachary
|Your witnessing is the very last thing I would have ever anticipated. You keep astonishing me. I've been fading away, but your poem got through to me. I've been thinking much the same. I just needed someone to put it into words for me. Thanks, Jared.