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Vacation Dream
by Constance M Gotsch

Saturday, January 28, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.

I haven't the slightest idea where this came from. I woke up with it. Must have been a dream. A shrink would love it.

Vacation Dream

I came to you,
and Time stopped.

I forgot
when I should
fly away.

We played
in castles,
And by the Rhine
saw Siegfried’s dragon
in the woods.

I woke up in your house,
Knowing
I should go,

In Frankfort
at the airport,
my ticket
in my hand.

I thought of Oma Matild’

I missed a visit with her
this trip,

I guessed
it was okay
I did see
Eliosabeth.

You disappeared.

Kiri licked my face.
‘Good morning..’
Home at my house


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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 4/5/2007

A unique depicting of a dream revealed in a black-white photo ~ in poetic voice.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 4/1/2007
Great read. Loved the imagery
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/23/2007
Sounds like a very busy dream. Thanks for the sharing.
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 2/13/2007
I like your abstract thoughts...art of a "Vacation Dream"
Excellent~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/4/2007
Dreams can be a trip sometimes..
Enjoyed immensely..
Reviewed by Casey Harmon 11/13/2006
Imaginative...
An author is only as good as her imagination. Good job, Constance!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/13/2006
A lovely piece ...Constance
You wrote your thoughts
and what you felt, after your dream
what else one needs?
Wlcome to The Den

Love & Peace
William
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 9/29/2006
I love this you've a great imagination...let it run freely...
Blessings as always,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Martin Hebert 7/3/2006
~~Constance~your poetry is wonderful..your words move so free~~

~~martin~~
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 4/12/2006
Ah "Home at my house", a glorious place to be, having returned from reality or a dream... Is there a difference? Love it!!
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 3/20/2006
ah, scenes of the rhineland and deutschland bring back memories. a wonderful, evocative write, poet.
Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor 2/28/2006
The heck with the shrink. I like your world.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion 2/27/2006
I reckon you had a grand visit with your Twin Soul..YAY!!
Love this..


Vesna;)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/20/2006
i like this!!
please check out
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Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 2/4/2006
What a gem! Be sure to eat unwisely before retiring so you will dream
more dreams that you can spin into multi-faceted diamonds!
In my opinion, what makes this one sparkle is the economy. Details are all there, and you wrap it up with a down-to-earth scene methinks reflects sly wit. More! More!! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed 1/28/2006
Run with those dreams my dear. And don't try to figure them out. Just enjoy them and write!
blessin's Sis Constance (or do you go by Connie?)
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/28/2006
Aren't dreams wonderful? Thanks for sharing yours, Connie. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance 1/28/2006
I wondered why you captilized Time. I have a problem with time stopping or getting stuck :) I like it! I think it's a playful piece with the ending to me, being a cat that licked your face. We all get different thoughts from different poets. I enjoy the freedom of that part of poetry most.

Mary Lynn Plaisance~
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