|Reviewed by Art Sun
|A very well written Haiku on this view of Nature and its power to speak to the world...
nice work.....Art Sun...
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|this is good...it's as simple as that. I am glad to see someone writing in the spirit of haiku, rather than the form...haiku work best when they are written concisely, with layers of meaning...like this work of yours.
Your choice of art in the link blends well, making this a total and delightufl package.
I will be visting your pages again.
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|You have your first name which is exactly my second name and your surname which is precisely my first name. So we do have some affinity exculding age as you are young and I am getting on in years :-) This is a delightful haiku. I have written some but I prefer the longer poetry. Victor|
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|YES YOU HAVE SPOKEN MY FELLOW POET.|
|Reviewed by Amy Avatar
|I agree...you have captured the
cycles of Nature...so simply...
|Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas
|Following the devastation in Louisiana (my roots) this speaks to me.|
|Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
|superb Carmen! just loved that. so much in so little. - shoma|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|Cycle of life. Undeniable, and permanent.
blessin's Sis Carmel,
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Sort of reminds me of menopause. :o)
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|well done indeed!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Very nice, Carmel! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|nature always has the final word ...|
|Reviewed by A PAX