by Paul Shakespeare
Monday, July 30, 2007
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Doin' it in the park
Doing it afterdark, oh yeah!
The lovers arrived at the entrance with anticipated delight,
Now wanting to miss an opportunity for a romantic tryst.
Although adventure and fun awaits those
To traverse the numerous pathways and many trails.
The lovers had only ONE thing in mind;
to find a place for their bump and grind.
With a knowing smile and a seductive glance,
They knew it was going to be well-worth the chance.
Having found a secluded spot,
with a bed of leaves and a big canopy top.
Wasting no time tey quickly undressed,
To risk being caught was the biggest aphrodisiac.
Bodies entertwined beneath the whispering pines,
She let out a gasp as he entered her from behind.
The exquisite pleasure created by the "tight" fit,
Caused him to moan and bite his lips.
Rolling over and spreading her legs wide,
She beckoned him to cum inside.
Toes dug-in-the-dirt; he begins a pushing,
Hands beneath her buttocks, forming a soft cushion.
His hardness penetrated her wetness;
causing her bud to swell,
Intensifying the rhythmic motion, he kept on ringing that bell
Her legs spread even wider; encirling his waist,
Pulling him deeper inside her; while quickening the pace.
Bodies glistens wet; with beads of sweat,
As the toe-curling climax reaches its apex.
Collapsing on the ground; shaking and trembling,
Marveling at what they done in total
Thick creamy-white liquid covered the leaves and grass;
Giving a glossy shine to her round, plump ass.
Gathering their clothes; they dressed real quick,
She complimented him stating, "that was some good dick".
Just in the nick of time; before anyone got a notion,
Outjumps the park ranger asking "What's all the commotion?"
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|Reviewed by Joseph Mangraviti
|I LOVE IT!!!
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Excellent poem, keep these coming and be blessed in the writing
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas
|You caught my attention with "Doin it after Dark - Blackbyrd 1975" Wow, what a memory you brought back. The poem is HOT. I'd love to read more. :-)
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Blackbird - 75, Rocksssssssssssss!
Now, this is "my" kind of HOT daring poetry!
I must chime in Rog, this tryst
was sure to please, as they chatted about the night
to take each other on the couch tonight!
I'm HOT and bothered, your writing is ooooooooooozing with desires, right in your face, stuff, the BEST! I feel is yet to be! From what we keep writing, let it flowwwwwwwwwwwwww, feel it cumminggggggggggg...
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Purple Sheee
Fantas. loving is deep pleasure, not worth hiding
So touch that skin, heart and mind, and let's begin - It's time....
DAmnnnnnn, hope you get a book out!