by Sharon Jordan
Thursday, August 07, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Lost, I’m feeling you slip away
Scared, wanting to hold you, please stay
Smiling, shining, glowing in your eyes
Hiding, running, don’t look in mine
How, wondering where the years went
Wishing, my hours had been better spent
You, slipping quickly, too quickly away
Wishing, I could take back yesterday
copyright 2008 by Sharon Jordan
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|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|your words truly resonate, sharon!
|Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
|Hello Sharon, I read your poem,"Lost". I found it a vsad but beautiful piece of writing. Well done. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
To the core.
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|wow, i can relate, you really hit the heart with this one|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find your verses timely, à propos, and very meaningful, Sharon. Thank you for sharing them. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Such deeply reflective questions and the finality of the non-answer is heartbreaking. We can never take back the past sadly only learn from it. Welcome back Sharon it is good to see you posting again and with such an excellant example of your work.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Very sad and so filled with emotion. Unfortunately but funny your poem sort of reminded me of Frank Sinatra's old song, "My Way" We, as humans, are so weak and understanding our vulnerabilities is near impossible. In life we laugh, love, live and lose which is all part of the great plan ; Forget about trying to make sense of it all. Stay strong my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.