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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
5/25/2004 |
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| wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/24/2004 |
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| an interesting poem though it is a bit abstruse ... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/22/2004 |
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I agree with Jim's comment. Why not use simple language for this?
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~ |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
5/22/2004 |
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| Using that many big words at the beginning of a poem probably guarantees that a lot of people won't finish reading it. I suppose this has to do with visiting a grave of someone you weren't fond of, but if that is the case, why bother going. I suppose if it is a lover who dumped you for someone else and then died early, that might explain it better -- especially if you postulate a ghost whispering to you on the breeze. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
5/22/2004 |
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I would like to understand the logic and feel the thoughts, it looks very cryptic...STyle of the poem is familiar...
Debashish |
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