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The Silent Flute
by Peter Paton
Thursday, November 30, 2006
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The Silent Flute
by Peter Paton

Saturday, July 09, 2005

The golden sun rises over an unbroken sky
soaring condors ride the thermals
and a chipmunk scurries from out of the undergrowth
and my heart settles
on what is to come
sensing the delivery
of the hand of fate

torrid heat and gentle zephyrs
glide across my skin
feeling remote and distant
inside the tabernacle
between soul and mind
all is relevant
every single thing counts

the touch of love
is without any equal
gilded lips of eternal bliss
soft the leaves rustle
within the canyon
lost so deep
in your mirrors of attraction

i came to you
and answered your clarion call
taught you the answers
that you had always sought
gave you the tools
to meet any task
seldom given
seldom asked

I am there for you
within the frame of
dimensional concepts
star filled skies
lightening flash
flowing rivers
sunburst flowers
misty eyes
hooting owls
chirping crickets
howling coyotes
croaking frogs
passionate persistence
bonds you and I

The Silent Flute
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Reviewed by Teresa Walker
A holiness I felt reading these words put in such a beautiful art form! Vivid pictures I am seeing in my mind and hearing the sounds from your words written. Omniscient...God eternal Spirit!

Deeply moved!
Reviewed by Richard Bowers
Unpardon me but I relent it boldly;
For it is far ahead, if I can be sure of it,
And far it is, that my hallucination be valid,
And hallucination it is, as it should be,
And however, unlike itself, mysterious, unknown, and untested,
So it be foreseen in my tireless search.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
your image is gorgeous, I hope to see this in person someday
and into your beautiful poetic offering transports me there
but too I feel as though I have been spoken to by God
& that is very amazing to say the least!

Through Your Lovely Bounty
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Beautiful title! I am transported through your words to this very serene setting and to the vivid images. There is a deep peacefulness within. Exquisite and a perfect place to end my evening. ~Best, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Asa Seeley
the silence of love's bond. thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Silent the embrace of love in the depth of nature's realm.
Beautifully penned Peter.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Very good writing, Peter
Reviewed by John Domino
There is so much joy packed into this poetic song.

God Bless!
Reviewed by Melissa Kesead
Beautiful and full of intense imagery.
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Now that's the Peter I remember. "All is relevant/every single thing counts", yes this is a lesson for me to live in the moment while not ignoring the lessons from the past. So beautiful! Saved. Hope you will grace us again soon...Lin
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Echoes of endless canyon walls.

Better late than never.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Great image, fantastic write . . .!

Take care,

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Oh my goodness! What a most beautiful and satisfying poem. I'm so glad I didn't miss it!
Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
What a fabulous write brings the soul searching for more, the depths are remarkable, Loved this so !!!! Take care Valerie
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Great write, Peter; good to see you are still here! I've missed your writings; as for me, I'm still pluggin' away! Nearly 2,900 stories now! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Peggy Kelly (Reader)
excellent write, thoroughly enjoyed it.
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
masterfully magical, oh Pan! ;-)
an exquisite write, peter; to be "inside the tabernacle between soul and mind" is what i strive for...
peace and blessings, poet,
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
The wide scope of this, combined with the attention to detail, gives your poem a powerful range that allows the imagination to roam, Peter.

Well done.
Reviewed by Cynth'ya
This poem scurries hoots chirps howls and soars with torrid passion. Love it Love it LOVE IT!
blessin's Bro. Peter, hope you are well,
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Awesome vision and a most excellent poem.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
This a wonderful piece!
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... Silent Flute indeed, Peter, and, like others below me, we ALL wonder how we missed this, if, indeed, we did, and have asked ourselves where your presence is gracing these days! :)) Thank you for lighting my page with your comments today and I hope you are well and continuing to receive, perceive and reflect truth and understanding wherever you're concentrated. As for this far-reaching and soul-stirring poem, I love the range, breadth and height of it and its sense of physical and spiritual liberation, all caught up in the wings of the fire of love. An eternal flame burns on this page. Bless you and Be well and fruitful. Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Where are you? I miss you...

Don't know how I missed this compassionate, beautiful piece; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
beautiful lines-all is relevant, every single thing counts, a stirring write
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Thanks you for making us see the chipmunk and feel the zephyrs. . .hear the hooting of owls, croaks of frogs, chirps
of crickets. . .'all of above!' By grounding your romantic and
loving message in nature, you have created a love letter that
I for one will always remember. Thank you for being one of a kind. . .the kind whose friendship and support I will always
treasure. 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Silencia McKayla
A touchingly beautiful way of describing love, peace fills every line of this poetry. A brilliant read.. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Looks like the Grand Canyon.
Beautiful poetry, Peter.
Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
An ODE to Love ..just beautiful imagery and I find it very enjoyable too.Places and may be times too. Thanks
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
Your poem, as well as the graphic each possess stunning beauty, Peter. I came to your den because I haven't seen a post from you for a while and wondered how you were doing. I hope you are well and that you will return to us soon.
Take care,
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Sounds like a wonderful place. Thank you.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
missed your writes..I won't stay away so long this time..
Glorious usual..

Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
Peter, I have so missed the wondrous excitement produced by reading the beauty of your words. I'm happy to once again be back at AD and able to take the time to appreciate your awesome work. Elizabeth
Reviewed by A PAX
The pinnacle of Paton poetry

all heart

with wonderful natural of the soul

happy holiday Peter

pax Anita xo
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Peter, "The Silent Flute" is stunning.
As a reader, and admirer of your work I felt myself soaring.
I was there stanza after stanza filled with the lush imageries you shared.
Although not mentioned my mind also felt emotional textiles too, however as an artist you painted vivid colors against my memory.

Thank you, I consider this a bold, and powerful work of art,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Reviewed by Jacquelynne Haycook
Peter, I have been slacking on keeping up with your poetry, and for that I apologize. However, once again I was taken aback by the beauty of your words. Mesmerizing piece! Merry Christmas!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Such a combination and marriage of love and nature, Peter. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Wonderful work
Reviewed by Zahala San Simone
This is absolutely lovely. Really enjoyed it.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Beautiful piece!
Reviewed by jude forese
cativating and compelling verse, Peter ...
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Dear Peter,

Your pen is a "Silent Flute" that plays the most gorgeous of melodies.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
I was pulled in by the picture...then captivated by your words. The beauty of this poem lingers throughout...the ending...ahhhhh! enveloping! Beauatiful...beautiful. Peter,you have outdone even yourself with this one!

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Peter, it is so good to read your words again! So much imagery is found in this piece..both subtle and vivid..well done! From beginning to end I was carried away in the words....

Reviewed by Sandie Angel

This is a very inspirational write. There are so much beauties in this one. I enjoyed it.

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by J M
Mesmerized of the beauty that lies within these lines.
God Bless,
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
Romantic drscription of love.
Well written.

Gods Speed.
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Once again Peter, you take the reader there, and not only to that place of"torrid heat and gentle zephyrs", but into the the depths of the mind and the very heart of romance. It doesn't get any better than this Poet.
"the touch of love
is without any equal
gilded lips of eternal bliss
soft the leaves rustle
within the canyon
lost so deep
in your mirrors of attraction".

Your work is always a gentle inspiration.
Reviewed by Miss Pandora
You share so beautifully such passion of the eternal love that is unrestricted, unconditional and sometimes this kind emotion is the one that can so easily be unrecognised. Superbly crafted as ever dear Peter. Love and hugs, Panda :)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
inside the tabernacle
between soul and mind
all is relevant
every single thing counts

Marvelous poetic thoughts, Peter.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Beautiful desciptions of this romantic poem. Nature increases our love. Victor
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Awesome write, Peter. I'm glad to see someone else write poetry without puctuations. I do it too, thou have sometimes people have been critical about it, I still do it. EXCELLENT write.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
The lute's music is heard by few. One needs to carry the respect of nature to hear it for Kokopeli stills plays in the in-between. I've missed your wisdom and messages Peter....a whole bunch!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
I can play the silent flute too...
So many great images, one can feel the enthusiasm of the poet for life.. Excellent Peter, once again..
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Still Even More Romance Designed...

Your Friend,TRASK
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
'...the touch of love
is without any equal...'
Qui, Qui!! Glorious Silent Flute poem Dear Peter, from Piped Piper himself! You call hearts home to the House of Love in our hearts!
Love to you!
Suzie xo :-D
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
"between soul and mind
all is relevant"

Those two lines send me far into the land of imagination and reason. Thank you, Peter. You are a POET yes, in capital letters.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by richard cederberg
Sir Peter the Empyreal ...

A beautiful confession of love for your precious one. The title arouses in me the passions of what was, and what could be, if we but keep our eyes fixed upon love and its author.

Like drops of dew on silken leaves.

Never rest your quill dear companion ...
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

The notes from your flute may be silent...but filtered via your pen, they become poetry, flavored like a song.

God bless you
Love&Prayers, Rhonda
Reviewed by Felix Perry
SWeet write that has echoes of longing and love bouncing back and forth from one lint to the next until reaching that last fulfilling line..."bonds you and I".

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Peter, you write in a wonderful style, always romantic with such vivid imagery, a gift to your readers from your soul. This is an outstanding example of your talent as a writer.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
FIne poetry Peter!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by George Carroll
Ah for the great outdoors. Splendid Peter.
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