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|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|An exquisite work, Brian!! It certainly engaged my senses, and more. You have some lyrically turned unique phrases which captured my imagination with delightful imagery.
I've noticed, with my own work, a progression of awareness which can be read if looked at differently. You seem to have this sense, also. For example, taking the first word of the second lines, excluding the last, you see:
A 'piece' within a piece, if read correctly. Growth is imperative for a mind to find itself and its place among over six billion human beings who occupy space on this world, but not within themselves. :)