Susan, I read your poem, "Night Visitor" I enjoyed reading it. Interesting style. I like that 'stalking' look and feel of this poem.
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Very creative piece. Reminded me a little of the Limerick,"luring a little bird close with a crust of bread" only this one has a better ending. You write very well and your imagery is excellent. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.