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Twelve Year Old's Memories
by Jill Christine Carpenter
Friday, May 13, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A Twelve Year Old's Memories of The Vietnam War, with Meatloaf (and commercial breaks) .........................................
My Father insisted at meal-time each day, that the T.V. be on to hear what they'd say on the Huntley/Brinkley news report of the latest happenings of the Viet Nam war.
We'd have roast beef, potatoes and black-eyed peas and Buddhist Monk protesters down on their knees. Burning alive on the news at five.
To hear more on this story we'd wait through the break:
"Bayer's the pain reliever we all should take!"
There were terrified refugees with no place to go, and while eating my dinner, I would know that their poor, frightened children with no shoes on their feet, would run through my dreams when I'd go to sleep.
"Try Sominex instead of counting sheep."
Experts would give their opinions sometimes on the usefulness of Napalm and Anti-personnel mines.
I somberly listened as I buttered my bread to news-cast celebrities counting the dead.
"Can your watch take a licking and still keep on ticking?"
I ate with my eyes closed; couldn't take any more of the black and white bloodshed of the televised war. In condensed and edited video shorts, sandwiched between ads, weather and sports.
I sat in my chair, swinging my shoes, digesting meatloaf and bombings, on the five o'clock news.
"And nothin' says lovin' like somethin' from the oven"
Sometimes we'd watch on another T.V. station, the news of the conflict that would cripple a nation. Old Cronkite intoned in his trust-worthy voice, "And that's the way it is."
He left us no choice.
"Remington's the shaver for busy men on the run, and is it really true that blondes have more fun?"
During those early days I couldn't have known, there were friends I'd grow up with who'd never come home. They'd just be young soldiers paying thier dues. More dinner-time statistics for the five o'clock news.
These were things that I'll never forget; how I learned about war from an RCA set, and those deep, somber voices, I can still hear them yet, "Good-night David, Good-night Chet."
by J. C. Carpenter
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jcc@jillsterart.com
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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
1/23/2009 |
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Thankyou for allowing me to see things through your eyes. This brought back memories. It reminded me that television is being watched by more people than we realize.
~Zach |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
11/23/2008 |
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I remember all of this Jill. The news reports then as they are now, are so chilling to the bone. I was 12 in 1960 when John Fitzgerald Kennedy was elected President of the United States. one year later I would be in hell. But be that as it may, my hell could not have been worse than a family finding out their son had died in Viet Nam. The feelings they must have gone through, I couldn't begin to fathom.
Thank you for sharing
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
11/17/2008 |
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| Hello Jill. I read your poem,"Twelve Year Old's Memories". I found it brimming with imagery. It brought back memories that were quite similar. Well done! Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den". |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/6/2008 |
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| Remember the same as you. Now another war in progress. Just lost a hometown boy who left a pregnant wife home having a boy to be named after him any day now. So sad, these young men being killed and never to return home to their families. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/10/2006 |
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| Powerful. I remember it much this way, but we weren't allowed TV during dinner but got enough after dinner news. excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/8/2005 |
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| The meatloaf sounded good, though the commentary I can recall as well, my parents waiting for news about their nephew, lost on the Thai border...he was my cousin, but all I could hope for was the news going off and Star Trek starting...memories keep us in tuned with ourselves...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/30/2005 |
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Sure brings back memories, Jill. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace to you.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Hanley Harding |
6/6/2005 |
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Dear Jill;
As one who volunteered during the Vietnam War, I found this to be a DEEPLY touching poem. It doesn't grind any political axes, but poignantly and profoundly describes so very much of the tormented emotions. This veteran thanks you for writing what you wrote.
Doc
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| Reviewed by Stacy Mantle |
5/16/2005 |
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| Loved this, Jillster! Love the breakthroughs on the "ads" and while I was only around for part of the war, I did have an RCA TV - and guess what? Still love the "dogs" that represent the model! Your poem does bring vivid imagery of what it would have been like... Thanks for putting me in a time period I'm glad I can't actually remember... :) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/14/2005 |
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| This is quite a poem, Jill - and those were sadly quite vivid memories for many Americans. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/13/2005 |
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| excellent capture of those times ... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/13/2005 |
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| Very creative. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/13/2005 |
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excellent nostalgic write; very nice!
(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D |
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