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Twelve Year Old's Memories
by Jill Christine Carpenter

Friday, May 13, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.

A Twelve Year Old's Memories
of
The Vietnam War, with Meatloaf
(and commercial breaks)
.........................................

My Father insisted
at meal-time each day,
that the T.V. be on
to hear what they'd say
on the Huntley/Brinkley news report
of the latest happenings
of the Viet Nam war.

We'd have roast beef, potatoes
and black-eyed peas
and Buddhist Monk protesters
down on their knees.
Burning alive
on the news at five.

To hear more on this story
we'd wait through the break:

"Bayer's the pain reliever we all should take!"

There were terrified refugees
with no place to go,
and while eating my dinner,
I would know
that their poor, frightened children
with no shoes on their feet,
would run through my dreams
when I'd go to sleep.

"Try Sominex instead of counting sheep."

Experts would give their opinions sometimes
on the usefulness of Napalm
and Anti-personnel mines.


I somberly listened as I buttered my bread
to news-cast celebrities counting the dead.


"Can your watch take a licking and still keep on ticking?"

I ate with my eyes closed;
couldn't take any more
of the black and white bloodshed
of the televised war.
In condensed and edited video shorts,
sandwiched between ads,
weather and sports.

I sat in my chair,
swinging my shoes,
digesting meatloaf
and bombings,
on the five o'clock news.

"And nothin' says lovin' like somethin' from the oven"

Sometimes we'd watch
on another T.V. station,
the news of the conflict
that would cripple a nation.
Old Cronkite intoned
in his trust-worthy voice,
"And that's the way it is."

He left us no choice.

"Remington's the shaver for busy men on the run,
and is it really true that blondes have more fun?"

During those early days
I couldn't have known,
there were friends I'd grow up with
who'd never come home.
They'd just be young soldiers
paying thier dues.
More dinner-time statistics
for the five o'clock news.

These were things that I'll never forget;
how I learned about war
from an RCA set,
and those deep, somber voices,
I can still hear them yet,
"Good-night David, Good-night Chet."

by J. C. Carpenter






 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Zach McClure 1/23/2009
Thankyou for allowing me to see things through your eyes. This brought back memories. It reminded me that television is being watched by more people than we realize.

~Zach
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 11/23/2008
I remember all of this Jill. The news reports then as they are now, are so chilling to the bone. I was 12 in 1960 when John Fitzgerald Kennedy was elected President of the United States. one year later I would be in hell. But be that as it may, my hell could not have been worse than a family finding out their son had died in Viet Nam. The feelings they must have gone through, I couldn't begin to fathom.

Thank you for sharing

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Reviewed by Ken Chartrand 11/17/2008
Hello Jill. I read your poem,"Twelve Year Old's Memories". I found it brimming with imagery. It brought back memories that were quite similar. Well done! Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den".
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/6/2008
Remember the same as you. Now another war in progress. Just lost a hometown boy who left a pregnant wife home having a boy to be named after him any day now. So sad, these young men being killed and never to return home to their families.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 10/10/2006
Powerful. I remember it much this way, but we weren't allowed TV during dinner but got enough after dinner news. excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/8/2005
The meatloaf sounded good, though the commentary I can recall as well, my parents waiting for news about their nephew, lost on the Thai border...he was my cousin, but all I could hope for was the news going off and Star Trek starting...memories keep us in tuned with ourselves...Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/30/2005
Sure brings back memories, Jill. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis
Reviewed by Hanley Harding 6/6/2005
Dear Jill;

As one who volunteered during the Vietnam War, I found this to be a DEEPLY touching poem. It doesn't grind any political axes, but poignantly and profoundly describes so very much of the tormented emotions. This veteran thanks you for writing what you wrote.

Doc
Reviewed by Stacy Mantle 5/16/2005
Loved this, Jillster! Love the breakthroughs on the "ads" and while I was only around for part of the war, I did have an RCA TV - and guess what? Still love the "dogs" that represent the model! Your poem does bring vivid imagery of what it would have been like... Thanks for putting me in a time period I'm glad I can't actually remember... :)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/14/2005
This is quite a poem, Jill - and those were sadly quite vivid memories for many Americans.
Reviewed by jude forese 5/13/2005
excellent capture of those times ...
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/13/2005
Very creative.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/13/2005
excellent nostalgic write; very nice!

(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
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