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|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|An excellent conundrum you leave us with, poet! fine poem...pure nothingness is achieved by equality ...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Absolutely outstanding, deep and beautiful, your poetry is outstanding. This haunts the mind and heart with its excellent vision,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... And the eye, flicking open, is the source of the fulness/emptiness, perhaps. My pea-like soft-sphere of a brain would have liked a reappearance (reappeyeance?!) of the eye in summation, but writers' humility leaves that for the reader, perhaps, to work out for him/herself. (? Need for final exclamation mark) Thanks for comments on Pulse - yep, sun-thing was a late addition to provide flow (I thought) and have brooded on "loved" but still quite like it! If you've energy (absolutely NO pressure whatever), perhaps you could tell me why not?? Only if you can be fagged... just interested. TY for this think-tank. Kate x|