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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/29/2008 |
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Roger,
A vivid picture from these lines. The last line is powerful; you capture the passion we have when we first conceive a dream. Hugs:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski |
7/19/2008 |
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Thank you for sharing, Roger. This gave me the goose bump. Very moving tribute to a deserving grandfather. Well done.
Denise |
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| Reviewed by Leann Marshall |
4/4/2008 |
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Roger,
I have read that a miner's life was very hard and unimaginable to those of us who pass our days in the light. This was very powerful and really, not only a tribute to your grandfather, but to those who shared his dangerous work.
Thank you for sharing this.
Leann |
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| Reviewed by Sol Solinski (Reader) |
4/11/2007 |
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| I really don't care about your grandfather and your poetry is so god awful that Walt Whitman's ghost should cockslap you |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/21/2006 |
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| what a well done piece- |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/6/2006 |
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| Great images ! A moving tribute to your grandpa....M |
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| Reviewed by Candida Eittreim |
7/12/2003 |
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Roger this is very well done. Your grandfather earned this
Candida |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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Wow this is some awesome descriptive work here <chills>feels like your grandfather is here!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
6/30/2003 |
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To shine a headlamp on a life in so few words is awesome. You can be proud of him and this poem.
Leland |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
6/29/2003 |
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| Wow...powerful emotions and sentiments. Bravo. Enjoyed very much. |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/29/2003 |
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Awesome write Roger...
I could feel every word
you wrote. That shows you
are a darn good writer!
I'll be reading more of you...
I also have a poem about my
grandfather..The Man I Never
Knew.. Check it out sometimes.
Again...awesome write here.
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Londis Carpenter |
6/29/2003 |
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| I can picture your grandfather in my mind. I almost feel like I know him now. Excellent write. |
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