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| Reviewed by totche |
6/24/2003 |
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| a very nice poem fayaz...soul enriching!! |
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| Reviewed by Nostalgia |
4/25/2003 |
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| my heart doesn't need any fon 2 hear I can hear the voice of ur heart |
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| Reviewed by Nessa Miller |
3/20/2003 |
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| ahhh this is beautiful:) |
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| Reviewed by rajab |
2/22/2003 |
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i have red this poem it was nice u can say that it was a good try and hope that u will continoue it coz i m seen a good poet in u who will give us a read able stuff in future
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| Reviewed by Debbie Edmiaston |
2/16/2003 |
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Beautiful, Fayaz! How wonderful it must be for whoever you wrote this for!
Great job!
Debbie :) |
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| Reviewed by Dr Raza Bhatti |
2/14/2003 |
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| I like you poem. |
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| Reviewed by mae |
2/14/2003 |
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| Very Good Poem..... |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/10/2003 |
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| Fayaz, a very good poem. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
2/10/2003 |
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Faye,
"Now my eyes are like your tamed deer!
in the mob of passers by
How they are exploring You! "
Excellent Nostagia
Peg |
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| Reviewed by David Leigh |
2/10/2003 |
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Now my dreams are your slaves!
even in the sharp days,
Nice phrase. |
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