by miriam M fredericks
Saturday, February 17, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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When God has blessed us and we have walked into our season, our lives will exhibit evidence of those facts.
Manifestation of a dream,
explosion of faith and self-esteem;
convincing us that God redeems
the talents of His children.
Seeing is believing; some may say
what about touching without delay;
realized aspirations join in the fray
joy and pleasure experienced today.
What a splendid feeling of pride
glow of achievement cannot hide;
God's excellent mercy He has supplied
to motivate His blessed offspring.
To God be all glory and praise
literary diamonds speedily raise;
just observe the pretty formation
as wishes materialize with oblations.
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|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|This is awesome prose and the visual indeed compliments your prose. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|"What a splendid feeling of pride, glow of achievement cannot hide;"
See this in the faces of children all the time, most rewarding. Nice.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Very well said...|