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| Reviewed by Hanley Harding |
8/31/2007 |
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Dear Amy;
Well done, indeed! It not only expresses the universality of woman, but also great dignity, confidence, and self-awareness of spirit.
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| Reviewed by Wesley Mack |
6/22/2007 |
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Great tribute to women the world over, I enjoyed this poem a great deal, I like that you identfied woman as universal, as she is. I immediately thought of a poem of mine while reading..
Eve
I cry these tears, in fear
for the souls that are unborn.
The many souls unformed, unfolded
I’ll cry Eve, forever to mourn.
Born of she, we come forth,
flowering parceled strips of land.
Passing her ripened seed,
on the wings of wind,
traversing the backs
of each tiny rain drop.
Eve’s fertile seeds effortless flight,
setting down on each continent.
Touching mankind, unknown before time,
she the quintessence of woman.
Keep writing Amy you have an immense talent |
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| Reviewed by Shoma Mittra |
6/8/2006 |
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| This is a very powerful write. I have written something similar I think..but this is just so well done. |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
5/5/2006 |
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| A reminder that 'woman' is a badge of honor, a title of power, a position of grace that a man can only hope to touch, to be worthy of notice by. Beautiful, empowering words. |
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
4/29/2006 |
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| WOW ISNT IT SO GOOD TO BE A WOMAN AND THIS I SEE YOU APPRECIATE AS WE ALL SHOULD THAT IS WHY WOMEN SHOULD BE WOMEN AND NOT MEN. I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY THEY MUST BE WHAT THEY ARE NOT. WE ARE UCH BEAUTIFUL FLOWERS AS YOU MENTIONED AND I WILL ALWAY CONTINUE TO BE WHO GOD MADE ME. THIS WAS AND I EXCELLENT FOR ALL REAL WOMEN AROUND THE WORLD. SOME THINGS ARE JUST MEANT FOR US (WOMEN) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/20/2006 |
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| a delightful celebration of womangood, i mean womanhood ... |
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| Reviewed by Larry Matthews |
4/18/2006 |
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An alocade to women who have survived all,overcome all and a tribute to their Glory.Let your light shine through your masterful poetry.
God Bless, In admiration, Luke |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/18/2006 |
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A wise colorful depicting of the greatest partner of Mother Poet...
"I am a Woman" is a live flower from the Poet"s garden of wisdom and wonders.
Reading Your works, Poet Amy Indira Ramdass ~ one can only think of You as an Ambassador of HELICON ~ bringing gifts to the ENGLISH FINE LETTERS. A Poet that honors her mission and pays her poetic dues to enrich The Major Art; and that Your words are brilliant cut diamond to be set on the Diadem of Poetry.
Health and Creativity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
4/17/2006 |
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| It's a blessing to be able to rejoice in one's womanhood. I've enjoyed this poem. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/17/2006 |
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A most enjoyable and unusual read.
Love the rhyme and flow as you tell the life story.
Splendid |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/17/2006 |
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The light of men would never reach full brilliance without the light of women and I believe that the opposite is true as well. We are different but equal in every way. We truly need each other in order to fulfill our mission as part of Creation. Let us all take refuge in one another, in a true and fervent love.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg |
4/17/2006 |
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| woman is a beautiful one to be - nice expression in this piece |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/17/2006 |
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This is truly a "phenominal" work. You have captured women through out the ages, the worst of what man has done to them and the best. The rise of women to equality shines through. This is a great work of art dear friend and a good statement.
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| Reviewed by Candy T |
4/17/2006 |
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| nothing can surpass the discovery of what it really means to be a woman. we, who have been taught to dilute our strength in order to accommodate the weakness that is man. at last we give ourselves permission to be what we really are: extraordinary. love this piece, thank you. |
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