In The Dungeon of Eternity
by A. Santo
Tuesday, June 13, 2006
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Locked in the dungeon of faith,
Against the damp walls of eternity,
Shackled with confidence,
Adorned in the fetters of love,
Held by the irons of mercy,
Confined in the prison of time,
Captured by the crusader of innocence,
Thankful for the grace of my restraints,
Counting my days of incarceration,
Blessing my captorís strong will,
Scarred by the manacles of peace,
Prepared for the fates that beset me,
I am chained to hope.
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Most interesting, Amira! Worthy of more than a single reading for sure. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|interesting melding imagery ... faith is a dungeon that needs to be broken out of so that one can experience liberation ... chained to hope until it materializes ... mercy that is heavy on the soul of the crusader who is imprisoned ...
conceptually stimulating ...
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
You are held in an awesome and true grip !
Love and Harmony
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Hope goes a long way and is a strong guard against the things life has against us. Faith is a belief that someday hope will take us safly to our freedom. This poem says so much and very rare ideals these days.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|You stated it perfectly and powerful..God, your such a light!!!!
|Reviewed by Judy Meeker
|This is a quality write. I enjoyed reading!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is splendid , creative, and inspired work Amira! Thank you!
The power flowing from this poem is breathtaking!Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Me too Amira. It is why I can believe! Thank you for your true heart of wisdom.
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|YOU ARE AWESOME, AMIRA - AND SO IS THIS WORK. I SHALL SAVE THIS TO MY TREASURE, GRATEFUL TO YAHWEH, THAT WE ARE BOUND BY THE SAME CONVICTIONS... PRESS ON! love & prayers ~ rhonda|