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|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by atti? _
|Although I truly loved the overall approach and concept of the piece, at times the format became very repetitive. While it seems you were clearly going for that, the pattern still would have been just as equally recieved if you didn't repeat it for every of the begining stanza's. That was just the begining though, once I hit the third I think it was, stanza, I really started to get into it. I really loved your concious sense of diction and syllable count... It made for a very clean and organized aesthetic, that allowed the content to really pop out. I liked this despite my complaints about the earlier stanzas. Good job man.|
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|This is very well written and it is a true deep reality.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
These are so many sides and facets to the multi faceted coin of human nature..
Terrific analytical poem
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|gee, i don't feel so bad about the other three people in my head...nice poem|