|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Awakening with limbs entwined is the best way to greet a morning
But then there must be coffee :-)
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent work, Taylor. I did not realize I had been gone so long.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A very beautiful and geometric write Taylor.
Your pen flows with solemn truth and profoundness.
Nice to read you again.
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|I miss your poetry and your friendship|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|individually, these are splendid...together they are outstanding in every way. I am glad I found these in here tonight.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Beautiful Morning To You Taylor "Awakening (Senryu" is poetic beauty embracing the heart & soul of poetry
Very Lovely & Eloquent Piece
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love haiku. I love these, Taylor. The image that you have chosen very effectively complements your own lovely painting of words. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Jean Pike
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|What a vibrant awakening this Senryu trinity is for the reader to enjoy! You have not lost your touch, dear Taylor. The photo you have chosen to accompany this piece could not be more perfect. It is wonderful to be able to read your work again!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|This flows like a clear stream and, like the spaces between heartbeats, the imagery exudes creations mysteries. There is a satisfying mutualism you've created, dearest Taylor, between image and content in this.
Light and Wisdom ...
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|How beautiful and solftly presented. It is printed in my mind, and that is always god poetry. You have the touch, and your pen needs to be more active.
Personal - I've been away for two weeks; getting the old body ready for the nest decade. Carotid artery surgery, and a pacemaker for longevity! Am on the mend,, after many flirtations with all the wonderful nurses and aids. But, I don't recommend it for time off. Am mending nicely. With love, - Bill
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|nice to read you Taylor, love the awakening|
|Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
|The sensuality of this poem is like a breath of fresh air, Taylor. Beautiful imagery. Lydi**|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Good job, Taylor. Good to see you posting again.|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|It's so nice to see your words at the Den again.. and as always your imagery and artistry with words is stunning...
hugs and love, Myrna
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Taylor, it's been too long...we need to see you here more often...Awakening is a spectacular geographic fusion of poetry's quill which coalesces with the sensual outline of nature's colorful vista of rebirth...every morning when we awaken...I see a woman's shapely figure in this mountain line (breasts) with veils layering the sky...see-through peek of spiritual awakening in the dance of clouds...it's poetry like this that stimulates our senses and motivates us to live each day to its fullest to be gifted with awakening each day with the serene self-certainty of creation's mystery...have a great fall season, Taylor...