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La Ibizenca
by Henry Martin
Wednesday, October 11, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
A poem depicting a woman, native of Ibiza. Part of the text has also appeared in my second novel, changed into a prose setting, further elaborated. |
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Strolling through the dry countryside thorny flowers scratching my feet the heat, almost unbearable, the Mediterranean sun beats on my back.
In the shade of Pomegranate tree stands a woman, proud, dressed all in black. Her features unclear soften by the veil of mystery, her linen shoes seems so soft against the rugged terrain.
My eyes wander Following the long lines of her rough black dress. Her tired deep eyes stare at me from the shade crafted by the edge of large black hat.
Her face is the map of humanity deep wrinkles the ridges and valleys blue veins underneath her skin, the rivers and streams of life. Thick lines circling her eyes remind me of the eyes of sailors, the eyes seeing over vast distances, the eyes of reality absent of any concrete color pressed together, dry from the sun.
For the first time I see a woman like this, so brute, so ancient as if the time froze in its path. She looks at me, emotionless as if I was observing an old photograph. So unreal, so mysterious.
A magnificent woman, unchanged for centuries standing there so proud the mother of a nation.
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Henry Martin's debut novel
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/15/2006 |
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A powerful tribute enhanced by the vivid imagery; thank you for sharing this gift, Henry. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/14/2006 |
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| vivid descriptions of a most vibrant woman ... |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/11/2006 |
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| Very nicely written. A word picture well formed with sumptuous imagery. |
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