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Stuck In The Lift' by steve Chering Monday, December 31, 2012 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Anyone got a cellphone?

Stuck in the Lift Ring…ring…ring…ring Here I’m stuck in an elevator thing Get me. Grab me. Somebody Interrupted harmony Clip clop, clip clop up the stairs Firemen rushing up in pairs Claustrophobia humming sound Dizzy. Take me to the ground Clanking winches. Take the strain Screeching cables. Moving again Painful progress. Down we go Seems forever, don’t they know? Metal coffin trapped inside All my worries now subside Ground at last. Easing pain “Oh my God. It’s stuck again!” Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring!

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Reviewed by John Domino	3/4/2013

Great poetic panic mania expression. Unique poem that we can all relate to in some way. After all, who has not feared being stuck in this steel box that is suspended only by small steel cables? I would rather be in a bumpy plane ride. Amen!




Reviewed by Teresa Walker	1/8/2013

I will never forget my brothers and I playing on an elevator and stopping it at Dillards and seeing a crack between the elevator and floor. People would walk up and we would talk to them and they did not know where it came from...so funny...we pretended it was candid camera...hahahah Thanks for making me remember the past! Enjoyed Teresa

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