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|Reviewed by Richard Bowers
|Which way shall I take the course to my reader’s hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeur’s wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generation’s benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.
|Reviewed by Rovena Tesfaye (Reader)
|Your portrayal of the sparrow vividly shows how in-sync you are with life. I’m glad you shared this poem.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I like this...it reads smoothly, not choppy as I find many rhyming verses seem to do...very good job! I enjoyed the imagery.