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Empty Soul
by James M Otos

Monday, April 30, 2007
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Dreading the end of the struggle

Empty Soul

In a life of autistic craving
Needing loneliness so much
Hating home because of people
Hating work because of the scurrying monsters
Despising friends who love me
Feeling gratitude piercing my solitude

Loving only one
So deeply the pit is black
Falling forever immersed in hopelessness

Longing for Paris
Where I understand no person
And they canít see me

In a dream I moved to Texas
Living in the heart of insanity
Happy with the craziness

Alone with my heart

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/8/2008
My home is empty, I hate it after hubby's death, except for cat. Don't work, have friends the pit is green for me, have hope sometimes, DO long for Paris, Dreaming always at nights and in the days, a dreamer I am, Not alone, have my Lord and Savior. Just opposite thoughts as yours.
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 3/26/2008
What a melancholic write
Reviewed by Richard Swartz 2/6/2008
very Good Write James and thanks for shearing Keep up the Grate Work.. Hope to hear more from you. I be tracking you
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 1/26/2008
Outstanding write~~*
Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. 4/30/2007
"Needing loneliness so much"
"Living in the heart of insanity
Happy with the craziness"

Vivid trip my friend....Thanks for sharing your journey......You are not alone.......



Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/30/2007
Wow, James. What a mood you set.
Very descriptive, very moving.

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