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| Reviewed by Acirč C |
8/7/2009 |
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I love dolphins but that is just sad what happened to them all.
Sadly that happens to them (well maybe not all of them) It happens and it's sad that no one cars.
Love Me |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/25/2008 |
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A sad but real account of what is happening globally to this planet. A most important and timely write, Evie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/31/2007 |
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OH My Evie, your mind is playing dolphin tricks!
They better treat those dolphins right!
How old are you again?
I'm amazed at your shining talent!
I am a school bus driver, almost 10yrs. now, and hear many children's stories, and you astound me! little lady!
Have a great day! in the sun or shade!
Warm Hugs, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
BE Happy! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/15/2007 |
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| Quite a strong sense of right and might you have young Mz Evie, keep going like that and one day you may be a marine biologist and get to swim with the dolphins...best to your mommy & the doggies from Ed & Rufuz...;) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/15/2007 |
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Heartfelt offering Evie!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/15/2007 |
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Stunned. Amazing, unique poetry, telling a powerful message in such an amazing way. A lot of thought and work has gone in to this.
Worth sending it out to a magazine..
Top write... |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
5/15/2007 |
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The one good thing about this generation, is they teach these environmental issues in schools mandatory. The amount of work they bring home is fantastic, and while Evie writes about these things, her younger sibs, well they likes to draw them...and I get a buzz out of encouraging these talents...I've got a fridge covered in pics, running outa door space LOL.
Proud Mama
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/15/2007 |
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| A very sad, true to life poem. Keep writing about the plight of earth's animals, Evie - your generation is their only hope for continued survival. Far too many adults no longer care. |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
5/15/2007 |
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| Great pen on the plight of a lot of marine animals. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/15/2007 |
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Evie,
I love the picture. Very good write. Not only the dolphins but many mammals and animals have been put on the endangered list by the insecurities and cruelties of man. Perhaps they'll come a day when the world will learn to appreciate all the blessings that they've been given and treat those blessings with respect. Keep writing and always remember that your talent is a blessing from God. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/15/2007 |
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Very well done and a good lesson on how quickly we can lose the beauty of this world and it's inhabitants that surround us. You captured your subject well here Evie and I know you put a lot of heart and soul into this one.
Hugs
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/15/2007 |
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A sad world we live in today. It appears there is no one left to care what is happening. Why? When will the people of the world begin caring again? A very good heartfelt piece.......
Be safe,
Karen |
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