|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Beautiful touching writing!|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Sad and beautiful, like a lot of us.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Melancholy and touching on the deepest wish all of us have...to 'end up' with that special loved one.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Beautiful and deep!|
|Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
|the moon will remember the old woman and old man..a special one Gilles|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|This is a nice poem, but there are quite a few grammatical errors to stumble over that your spell check should have caught, Gilles.
|Reviewed by visitor
|The "old woman not only has found a love of a twin soul, but as rooted so deeply spiritual,that time, space and matter can never seperate them, even through their struggling earth lessons..The astral provides the realm for the healing between seperations of the twins.. For she knows his demons , yet knows his purity of heart on the other side, the ability of him to transform, pick himself up when he is so down. When the old man looks outside he see's the butterfly's and she see's the White Wolf.. with her spirit, as he heals her forever, and ever and ever..|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Never give up hope, beautiful write, Gilles.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
This write just gave
me a chill...
It is sad and yet
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is hauntingly beautiful......just so sad that age is part of this one.. < < <Smiles>>....little fishy I think...lol