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More than words can ever breathe
by Art Sun
Thursday, October 20, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Embedded
Within the core of pupils
No sound to listen to
No voice
Nothing to make sense
Of that depth
Those emotions
Bottled within the mind
My thoughts confuse even me
For it is the touch
That sensation where we
Capture
An aura of understanding
Craved like a hunger
Starved by the inability
To view
More than words can ever breathe
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
8/11/2012 |
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Love the metaphors in your lines...Makes for unique poetry...
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/23/2011 |
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| SO GLAD TO SEE YOU, ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... 'To view more than words can ever breathe'-------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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